Jakdan the Decoder

Jakdan often translates literary and historical allusions into plain language, giving his readings an earthy, plainspun feel. Sometimes his translations reveal a new side to literary allusions, such as his handling of "the home of Jù Mèng" in the following poem by Qián Qǐ (錢起).

逢俠者		Faršatai yabure niyalma be ucarahangge
燕趙悲歌士，		amargi bai usacukai uculere haha,
相逢劇孟家。		weilere antahai boode lakdari ucarabuha,
寸心言不盡，		mujilen-i gisun gisureme wajire undede,
前路日將斜。		julergi jugūn-i šun dabsire hamika.

On Meeting a Knight Errant

A man from the north singing sorrowfully,
I encountered by chance at a roadside canteen serving parlour.
The sun on the road before us had nearly set,
But he was still not yet finished saying all the words in his heart,


The subject of the poem is a knight errant (also known as 遊俠), a kind of wandering warrior known in stories for defending the weak and fighting the wicked. In the original poem, the author meets him in a certain "home of Jù Mèng" (劇孟家), an allusion to a famous knight errant of the Western Hàn, who lived around nine centuries before the poet was born. The two continue on together, walking into the sunset, as the 'knight errant' pours his heart out to the poet.

Some interpretations take the "home of Jù Mèng" to mean the city of Luòyáng, but Jakdan interprets it differently, using the phrase weilere antahai boo. This term does not appear in my dictionaries, so it needs some decipherment.

Norman has antahai boo meaning "a room for receiving guests," and in spoken Sibe we have antⱨey bo, with the same meaning. But what do we do with the modifying weilere? Literally this seems like it ought to mean "a room for receiving working guests," but what kind of place is that?

The similar Sibe term antⱨey kuren means a hotel, in which the "guest" is actually more of a customer than an acquaintance. It seems possible that a weilere antahai boo then could be a place that welcomes laborers as customers, presumably for a brief rest and refreshment. This could also be the type of place that a lonely traveler might stop to take a break before continuing on his long journey into the west.

Mustard Greens and Friendship

Jakdan's translations of Chinese poetry are very often close in literal meaning to the original Chinese, within the constraints he imposed on himself of matching the rhyme scheme and word-count of the Chinese poem.

In some cases, though, Jakdan departs from the original in interesting ways, and one of these is in his translation of Resigning as Prime Minister (罷相作) by Lǐ Shìzhī (李適之).

This poem runs as follows in Chinese:

避賢初罷相，
樂聖且銜杯。
爲問門前客，
今朝幾個來。

There are a number of interpretations of the meaning of the original poem. It is certainly clear that Lǐ has resigned from his post as prime minister, and is drinking, and asks how many guests are (or will be) at the door. Looking over interpretations and discussions on the internet, some people believe Lǐ is depressed, and now that he is no longer important no one comes to his door. Others believe that retiring from his formal position frees him up to drink, and he hopes to have visitors to drink with.

Jakdan has a different take on it, which should not necessarily be considered more authoritative, but is interesting in its own right:

saisa anabufi saisiyang ci nakanggala,
bolgo nure hojo takan omicina,
fonjime tuwa dukai juleri antahasa,
tetele isinjirengge giyanakū udu niyalma.

Below is my translation from Jakdan. When I first posted this, I used the second person in the first couplet is based on the optative -cina, which Verbiest says is used when making a request to a superior. However, after encountering -cina in another poem where it clearly refers to the first person, I have come back to amend this translation.

Before I resign in defeat from the post of Prime Minister,
I hope to drink clear wine with satisfying mustard greens;
Ask and see, of guests before the gate,
How many have arrived so far?

Jakdan's version of the second line is quite different from Chinese, and is really the inspiration for this post. Where the Chinese might be understood as something like "for the time being, the happy sage takes a cup", Jakdan has dropped the happy sage, turned the cup into wine, and added hojo takan, which I translate as "satisfying wild mustard greens."

The greens are not entirely out of place, since pickled or salted vegetables were served with wine. But they are not present in the Chinese at all, and since Jakdan adheres to five words per line in these translations something had to be sacrificed if the wild greens were to be added. Apparently it was more important to fit the greens in than to keep some version of the "happy sage." What was his motivation for doing this?

The motivation may lie in a double entendre around the word takan. This word looks like it could be a nominal form of takambi, "to know someone" (the same way gūnin is a nominal form of gūnimbi). Is it possible that one might serve wild mustard greens with wine in order to evoke the idea of familiarity, in the same way that you might serve fish (魚) to evoke the idea of plenty (餘)?

If so, this would be a uniquely Manchu custom, because the homonym only works in Manchu, not in Chinese. Perhaps what Jakdan has done here is to inject something characteristic of Manchu literati culture to amuse and entertain his audience.

Why We Need to Read Chinese Poetry in Manchu

I've been trying to improve my understanding of Manchu poetry by reading Manchu translations of Chinese verse. One of the surprises that has come out of this is that English translators of Chinese poetry often miss important points that are captured in Manchu translations.

As an example, this morning I have been looking at a poem titled Light Rain in Early Spring (初春小雨) by Han Yu (韓愈). Here is the Chinese text, and Jakdan's translation:

天街小雨潤如酥,		alban giyai imenggi-i gesei aga busu busu,
草色遙看近卻無;		orhoi boco gorokici sabucibe cincilaci dule akū;
最是一年春好處,		emu aniyai niyengniyeri saikan ba jing ere,
絕勝煙柳滿皇都.		gubci hecen-i burgašara fodoho ci cingkai fulu.

Jakdan's translation is relatively easy to understand:

The rain, like [a sheen of] oil on Government Service street, falls lightly,
though one sees the color of grass from afar, if one looks closely it is not really there.

Where the Chinese has "Heaven Street" (天街), Jakdan has rendered this as the more prosaic "Government Service Street." Jakdan apparently takes this to be a street in the capital where court officials worked. This goes well with the second line about the color of grass, because in the imperial palace in Beijing green tiles appear on buildings used by court officials, as opposed to yellow tiles on buildings used by the imperial family.

Here we see a quarter of the city where government workers toil away, a place that is probably normally quite dull, but the rain falling on it makes it shine, and from a distance the green tiles look like grass.

This sets us up for the second half:

The most beautiful spring scene of the whole year is this very one,
far better than the willows that hang everywhere over the city.

The conclusion of the poem is that the soft spring rain has transformed an otherwise dreary place into the most beautiful scene to be found anywhere.

Having read Jakdan first, the Chinese is relatively easy to understand. But if I only had access to the Chinese, I doubt I would fare so well, and I'm not alone. Most of the translations and interpretations that I have found of this poem miss the important point that the spring rain has transformed a mundane scene to one of beauty, and focus instead on the concrete imagery of the grass and the willows.

Here are four English translations, all of which treat the grass as literal grass, and take the willows to be the main subject of the second couplet:

https://www.chinlingo.com/articles/601316/
http://www.chinese-poems.com/h3t.html
http://www.learnancientchinesepoetry.org/2019/02/22/han-yu-early-spring-write-to-zhang-the-eighteenth-now-engaged-as-a-flood-control-officer/
https://www.dougwestendorp.com/poetry-journal

Lest we think that these failures are unique to English translators, there is also Baidu article on this poem with a modern Mandarin translation, here:

https://baike.baidu.com/item/%E5%88%9D%E6%98%A5%E5%B0%8F%E9%9B%A8

The Baidu translation takes 酥 to mean "yogurt" (酥酪), which comes across as a little strange. It also takes the grass to be literally present, though "sparse" (稀疏零星) on closer examination, despite the fact that in the original poem the grass is not there at all (無).

The Baidu translator also takes the willows to be the main subject of the last couplet, rendering the last line as 最美不过杨柳满城的长安, "The most beautiful, but for the willow-filled city of Chang'an."

I think it's fair to say we could learn a lot from reading the Manchu translations of Chinese poetry. These were, after all, made by people who were usually closer to the subject than we are.